I mostly wanted to get straight to the point rather than have as much fluff as I did before. I also wanted to cut down my introduction. I believe I told the customer exactly what they needed to know in as little time as possible. I definitely felt a bit more comfortable in front of the camera.
You seemed super comfortable doing this. I get very nervous when I get in front of a camera. I liked that you got right to the point, kept it short but without losing any of your important information. My favorite part of your pitch was your closing line. I thought that would be a really good slogan (or mission) for your company. Great pitch!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your pitch! Your confidence in yourself and your product showed in your pitch. I feel this was a convincing approach and that customers would be intrigued by the points you made and the setup of your pitch. I'm excited top hear more about your product over the next few weeks!